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Nothing Real About Friendship
Contributed by
Aaralyn
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Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 04:13:44 PM in AEST
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There's nothing real about friendship
It's nothing but lies and deceit.
In all my life and my many attemps
I thought a true friend I would meet.
It didn't end up turning out right
I guess it wasn't meant to be
Am I destined to be friendless all my life?
To drift in that dark and lonely sea.
I thought that you were the one
Who would always be by my side
I thought you would never hurt me
I didn't have to keep all of my pain inside.
With you I felt I could open up
You really used to listen
But you only cared about your end
My heart feels beaten into submission
As long as I was there for you
That's all you cared about
It may have taken me quite a while
But now I have you all figured out.
It took you turning your back on me
For me to finally realize
That you weren't what you appeared to be
You kept a good cover even looking into my eyes.
You didn't really want to be my friend
You were waiting for an excuse
To tell me you didn't want me around
In the beginning you just couldn't tell the truth.
I am more hurt now
Than I would have been
You said you were my "big sister"
I thought you considered me kin.
I guess this is the end
And there is no looking back
Now that things went down like this
We'll never get a friendship back on track!
Copyright ©
Aaralyn
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2004-02-15 16:13:44]
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Re: Nothing Real About Friendship
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by James_Forest on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 04:36:36 PM AEST
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| very nicely written. Apparently you have gone through a really bad event with a friend. I know how it feels. |
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Re: Nothing Real About Friendship
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by gery_giggles on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:03:56 PM AEST
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| i know how this feels....going through it right now...good write showed lots of emotion<br />
luv always |
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Re: Nothing Real About Friendship
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 06:55:18 AM AEST
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There is reality in true friendship. You'll never make it through life without friends. It's impossible. There's One great Guy up in heaven that cares for me, and won't ever leave me. If not Him, take me as a friend. I've never broken a friendship, and I never intend to. In friendships people give there hearts away, trusting completly in the other person to be true to the laws of love. You've gone through that. Please, give friendship another chance.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Nothing Real About Friendship
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by freddiem on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:48:02 PM AEST
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| Your pain is felt |
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Re: Nothing Real About Friendship
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:01:46 PM AEST
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Great rhyme
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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Re: Nothing Real About Friendship
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:36:38 PM AEST
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| I LIKED YOUR POEM. . I read it without having trouble understanding. good write. sandy |
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Re: Nothing Real About Friendship
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:41:29 PM AEST
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It'll be okay, hunny. Now YOU are the big sister.
-Britt |
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Re: Nothing Real About Friendship
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:01:57 PM AEST
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Alas, true friendship takes work. It exists, but only in the heart that desires it enough to give themselves for it.
Don't give up hope!
Andrew |
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