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Poem: Untitled
Contributed by
Robza171
on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 01:24:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Troubled minds, broken lies,
Problems only truth can bind.
Life is over, though I still survive.
Put me through this pain and strife.
Deep dark inhibitions, wounds open wide,
Hung out in the open and left to dry.
Easy to manipulate, so easy to divide,
Separate the friendly from the other half that’s shy.
So many questions, not many answered.
Am I who I am? Or am I plastered?
Am I someone you like or just the next bastard?
The questions I have – I want them answered.
Out in the cold, out in the rain,
It once seemed worth it, but now it’s a game.
It all seemed so worth it, now I feel shame,
Somebody please tell me...
Am I the one to blame?
Wise decisions with foolish rewards,
You’re having fun, but still you’re bored.
The way home is left, though you decide to go right,
Awkward situations caused by loss of temper and might.
Confusion amidst, the beautiful morning air,
One moment you’re smiling, the next you are scared.
The breath of the day upon my scaly skin,
Even though to me it's over, it has yet to begin...
Copyright ©
Robza171
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2004-02-15 13:24:07]
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Re: Poem: Untitled
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by niki on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 02:06:04 PM AEST
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| i thought it was a great<br />
piece of reading. |
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Re: Poem: Untitled
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 02:36:31 PM AEST
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| well done ...the uncertainty and lonliness of depression can be devastating...Welcome to YPDC<br />
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Shari |
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Re: Poem: Untitled
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by James_Forest on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 04:40:53 PM AEST
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| as a fellow newcomer to this site, I must say you are very good at writing. Keep it up, and don't let criticism get to you |
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Re: Poem: Untitled
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by Kie on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:28:23 PM AEST
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| Hello Robza. Welcome to the site! I thought your first submission was absolutely divine. You have so much talent. This one was just incredible. I look forward to your next submission. Welcome!! Kie |
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