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my own torture
Contributed by
antares
on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 11:10:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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So far away but yet so close,
the prize before my eyes.
Within my grasp i need but accept!
But something stays my hand..
Whats this cruel joke i play?
To what end do i continue the torment?
i cannot say as the king of fools,
i leave and watch it fade
slowly into the distance.
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antares
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2004-02-15 11:10:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: my own torture
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 11:16:14 AM AEST (User
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Nice write keep them coming. I hope you look at my latest. bye Wes... |
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Re: my own torture
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:02:15 PM AEST (User
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Hi Antares, I really enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing it. Kie |
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Re: my own torture
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 06:18:39 PM AEST (User
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i ask these questions alot, this is a great poem, keep it up. luv phil xxx |
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