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A Rhyming Poet
Contributed by
Jazz
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Saturday, 7th September 2002 @ 02:46:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If I tried to write a story,
I could never make it through.
My heart is just not in it.
So what shall I do?
I try to make a plot,
and I try to make it work.
I add the demons and the gnomes,
and add the night to lurk.
I make my characters right.
They are the way I want them to be.
But I can't put the characters to action,
I just can't do it, you see.
I know the story in my head,
but no paper wants to take.
Trying to write a story,
is one big, bad mistake.
My portfolio is filled with things,
but no stories can be found.
Try as you might, you will falter,
cause there is none around.
I am who I am I guess,
and my rhyming forever will show it.
I am not a story writer my friends.
I am a rhyming poet.
Copyright ©
Jazz
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2002-09-07 14:46:49]
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Re: A Rhyming Poet
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 7th September 2002 @ 02:55:02 PM AEST
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I like this, Jazz....
I love chatting in rhyme...
I do it all the time...
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Re: A Rhyming Poet
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by Lia on
Saturday, 7th September 2002 @ 03:23:16 PM AEST
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| yup yup..this one movessssssssss...my foot was a tappin hehe...great job jazz! |
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Re: A Rhyming Poet
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th September 2002 @ 07:35:00 PM AEST
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| i found myself bobbing my head to the beat as i read! Good job |
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Re: A Rhyming Poet
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by LJ on
Saturday, 7th September 2002 @ 07:55:48 PM AEST
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| you keep on rhyming! This is wonderful! |
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Re: A Rhyming Poet
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by country_mistress on
Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 01:52:19 AM AEST
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This is very true! I can certainly vouche for the way it feels. Thanks for the comment on "The Familar Returns". Please check out the first in the story "A Familar Upon" Thre is more brewing in the story line!
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Re: A Rhyming Poet
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 12:14:01 PM AEST
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| you're a poet and you don't show it |
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