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Silence is the sweetest agony
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
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Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 04:49:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Sometimes best remembrances are things of farthest past,
For when the sun glares in your eyes you wish that it shall pass
’Tis only in the calm of dusk, you realize it’s gone
And only in the cold of eve, for that one thing you long.
Such are life's most precious
The shortest are the most delicious
And those you lose are those of greatest worth
Many time's the sorrow
As night gives 'till tomorrow
You wish that somehow you had saved the hurt
I shall not wonder anymore, my answer starkly clear
This friendship may abuptly end,
Yet I shan't shed a tear
For this was the cost
Of undoing the spell
I bid you bright futures...
For this is farewell.
Sincerely,
Jonathan D. Jou
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EternitysLyre
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2004-02-15 04:49:08]
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Re: Silence is the sweetest agony
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:37:26 AM AEST
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| Wow. I can't say how much I can relate to this poem. It's amazing, and yet so sadly beautiful. Wow. |
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Re: Silence is the sweetest agony
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:41:47 AM AEST
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| Been there, done that. And you've described it perfectly. I also liked the title, it's very fitting. Excellently done. |
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Re: Silence is the sweetest agony
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 06:01:09 AM AEST
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This certainly dredges up some memories of my own. I have tried on several occasions to capture this in a poem, but none even hold a candle to this marvel. Inconceivable talent, and a somber touch. Mind blowing.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Silence is the sweetest agony
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by Kie on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 12:39:12 PM AEST
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| I liked this one. I think many of us can relate. Kie |
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Re: Silence is the sweetest agony
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by niki on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 02:20:25 PM AEST
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| i thought it was great<br />
perfectly written<br />
i look forward to more of <br />
your writtings. |
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Re: Silence is the sweetest agony
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:36:58 PM AEST
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| Excellent write ... the change in pace throughout the poem was an interesting touch ... Jan |
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