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Submerge
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 01:52:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Silently sinking
Swiftly subsiding
Bitter illusions
Put to rest
Asphyxiation sets in
Bubbles of remorse
Let loose
Tears and water
Mixing freely
Futile attempts
To capture air
Ghosts of dreams
Dead and gone
All around
Drives her demented
One quiescent scream
And she reaches
the bottom
No more...
No more...
A wasted life
A worthless demise
No more...
No more...
Copyright ©
Avarice_Riot
... [
2004-02-15 01:52:04]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Submerge
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 02:46:17 AM AEST
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A tragedy beautifully penned. Despite the sadness you wrote beauty into it. That is a difficult thing to do. You did it well.
Rainbows,
Rita |
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Re: Submerge
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by L-Dee on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:10:27 AM AEST
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| Brillant!! |
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Re: Submerge
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:28:31 PM AEST
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| wow. |
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Re: Submerge
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 09:36:48 AM AEST
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* shudders *
Wow, the impact of this poem was tremendous. Great job. |
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Re: Submerge
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by silent on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:34:25 AM AEST
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I love that clip, but anyway tremendous effort put into this, as always i LOVE your work :)
Silent |
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