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The field of sunlight dear
Contributed by
Shadow
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Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 01:47:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Golden fields of wheat divine
Countless hills shaped with time
Green meadows of flowers frail
O what stories your lips could tell
The sunlight grows and hails the dawn
The fairies come as if drawn
The sweet dew of God's first light
Rising towards the greater height
The lover's kiss at sunset�s glow
The gentle breeze of evening does blow
All hail the falling sun
The sweet dear day is all but done
Hold your lover in pure delight
The moon summons all of night
The wheat bows for all the hail
The moon's beauty so soft and pale
The fairies hum their lullabies
The sweet birds take to the skies
The heavens hold the rising sun
Awake dear fellows the dawn has come
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Re: The field of sunlight dear
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by EternitysLyre on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 02:00:01 AM AEST
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Fluid, well-rhymed, and picturesque of any poet. You may want a dictionary next time, lest another spelling freak like me points it out for you.
*laughs* This was a heart-warming peice, much like the sun outside.
Beautifully done.
�To be quick to find fault in others is nothing; the TRUE cynic can find the Achilles� heel in fried tuna.�
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Re: The field of sunlight dear
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 02:29:30 AM AEST
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Shadow, this piece is magnificent. You should try this style more often. It well suits you. This was a true pleasure to read and I did not see a misspelling at all. If you see it would you let me know? LOL. I certainly don't want the poetry police after me.
Great write,
Rita |
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Re: The field of sunlight dear
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by niki on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 02:27:52 PM AEST
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| i would like to know what you spelled wrong<br />
anyways i enjoyed your poem |
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