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The Best of Me
Contributed by
Kilikina
on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 12:51:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Raging hate and wasted tears
Boil in me, my heart they shear.
The pain too much, it aches and burns,
I pray for somewhere I can turn,
But all I see is misery,
The very thing that’s blinded me.
Darkness lying everywhere,
I’ve had enough of this despair.
Behind my heightened fears I hide
As I cry and hurt and die inside
My troubled soul I can’t escape
Because my life it chose to take.
I look for help in one last place,
Where all I see is my smirking face
The second I thought I was free
Was when I got the best of me.
Copyright ©
Kilikina
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2004-02-15 00:51:11]
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Re: The Best of Me
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by harshreality on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 12:55:50 AM AEST
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| I can completely relate. This is so how I feel. And tonight is one of those nights I needed to know I'm not the only one. Somehow it helps to escape the lonliness (just a little). Thank you! |
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Re: The Best of Me
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 02:16:05 AM AEST
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| I have so been there...I hate the paradox that hope brings. Excellent write! |
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Re: The Best of Me
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by bluoreo on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 04:00:43 AM AEST
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| Great write. I love the way you expressed your feelings. I can feel your pain. |
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Re: The Best of Me
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by arden on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 12:59:58 PM AEST
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| awesome! really liked this. good work. Arden |
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Re: The Best of Me
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:54:07 PM AEST
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| atleast now i know theres another person fighting the battle within |
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