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THE CHILD WITHIN

Contributed by lovingangel4u on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 12:43:54 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



How can they been so cruel, tormenting the young
Too defenceless to fight back talk back hit back GET BACK!

How we run how we try to hide
Run away from the hurt hold on to some pride
We’ve been put down run over felt like we died
No reasons to live just want to hide.

We grow with the scars on the child within
Seeing where in this world we’d fit in
Trying not to think where the frustration and hurt is coming from
Let’s just get on with it! Let’s just be strong!

But in our silent times we hear that child
Still afraid and crying then we feel
That frustration and hurt and where it’s coming from.
Why doesn’t it just leave us alone, go away we don’t need to know!

Alone is the child within still wanting love
or just a warm protective hug.
Like a child pulling on a mothers skirt
So does our child within remind us of its hurt.

Just love it and hug it with all that you are
Give it understanding caring and feel like a star.
Give it all that you can be
Because the child within is you and me.




Copyright © lovingangel4u ... [ 2004-02-15 00:43:54]
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Re: THE CHILD WITHIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Intostella on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 06:51:37 AM AEST
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I love that poem. Thanks.


Re: THE CHILD WITHIN (User Rating: 1 )
by outsider on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:05:58 AM AEST
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This is a really top notch write... I love the feeling that has been put into it, and its been done with an awful lot of skill. Its excellent<br /> <br /> Albi tieghi mo gradh


Re: THE CHILD WITHIN (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:05:11 PM AEST
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AAWW a little teary for me,but well done on this! Christina


Re: THE CHILD WITHIN (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 12:35:58 PM AEST
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Like i have said before, great everytime, i know what you are talking about in this poem, i have felt like that, you really get the emotions out of the reader. Great Job.

John




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