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humans are soft
Contributed by
mark
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Saturday, 7th September 2002 @ 01:32:50 PM in AEST
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bleeding,
i sit on the floor,
hurting from the hits you laid upon me.
i wish i could be a wolf,
a bear.
they can withstand this torment.
humans are weak.
my back bleeding,
i stand up.
you have reached the limit of my patience,
no more.
i get up,
hunched over.
my face is twisted in pain,
you are mine.
i will stop you,
end your torture.
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Re: humans are soft
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by Jazz on
Saturday, 7th September 2002 @ 03:00:22 PM AEST
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When you said you were writing a poem, I just was not expecting this to be it! **hugs** I like this place! I believe I have found a new home! :)
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Re: humans are soft
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by Tonic on
Saturday, 14th September 2002 @ 12:51:10 AM AEST
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Humans are weak? What the fu@$!?
If animals are so strong then why are there so many on the endangered species list?
I say lay off the beastiality.
Besides that your poem makes no sense first the guys gets beat down then he's gonna come back and beat the other guy up...................Hello! he just got beat up, this aint wrestling were the goodguys make a comeback. |
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Re: humans are soft
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by mark on
Sunday, 29th September 2002 @ 02:52:24 AM AEST
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| animals are stronger than humans in an emotional sense. they lose someone or something, they don't brood over it. your warped mind needs to stop looking at something that isn't there. i don't like beastiality, nor do i practice it. get your mind out of the gutter! you don't like it, just say so! anyway, the first guy only get hurt on the back, and one arm, it didn't incapacitate him. got any other problems, tell a wal, it might care more than me. |
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