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LA series part 6
Contributed by
merry
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Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 05:25:44 PM in AEST
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the pick up truck didn't fit the scene
until he drove into town
too good looking for his own good
there were promises and offers
but he played hard to get
and took it on the chin
landed that indie film in '86
nobody ever heard of him again
until last year
he reappeared, grizzled
there was demand for the type
so he works again
she spends all her time by the pool
dreaming about being in love
he finds her sleeping in the afternoon
the dogs haven't been fed
and that ticks him off
she's spoiled and he knows it
too young for her own good
and thinks he should know better
but he doesn't and shrugs it off
they are independent elements in hollywood's elite
now they have acquired a sheen of star appeal
he's uncertain about a lot of things
she reconciles her checkbook with acute accuracy
he avoids his reflection and prefers anonymity
gmm 2004
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Re: LA series part 6
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 12:58:53 PM AEST
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| impressive characterization, very realistic:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: LA series part 6
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 06:38:33 PM AEST
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I agree with nessa....eveything you write is impressive. :o)
Larry |
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