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My Turmoil

Contributed by ToriVeigh on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 03:47:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



My heart is in turmoil
I don’t know what to do
I want you to be happy
But I want to be happy too

I don’t want to let you go
And I hope you’ll choose to stay
But separate, you may need to grow
Yet, for growing with me I pray

It’s complete contradiction
And I can’t change my heart
My tears will fill the ocean
Should ever we break apart

My heart lightens with your every smile
With it you brighten my day
But when I witness the pain of your trial
The day turns cloudy and gray

Am I making any sense?
Do you understand my cry?
Though it may be at my expense
For your joy, I would comply




Copyright © ToriVeigh ... [ 2004-02-14 15:47:22]
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Re: My Turmoil (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 03:57:10 PM AEST
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An excellent poem! Kie


Re: My Turmoil (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 04:12:30 PM AEST
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Good stuff. Very appropriate today. To unselfishly sacrifice yourself for another's happiness is a noble, but very difficult thing. I hope it works out.
Stitch


Re: My Turmoil (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 04:25:05 PM AEST
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Don't give up on him yet sweety, If you really show you love him - I believe, He'll get better.
I did. Read " Sherry, My Love."


Re: My Turmoil (User Rating: 1 )
by Jazz on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 04:58:43 PM AEST
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Sometimes the best way to love someone is to let them go. Everyone needs a chance to spread their wings, and fly. A heartfelt poem...

Jazz


Re: My Turmoil (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 07:14:33 PM AEST
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I have to agree with Stitch and Jazz... Good write...
Jenni


Re: My Turmoil (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 08:05:06 AM AEST
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Sometimes when you leave the gate open, it will keep the dog from jumping over it and getting out of the yard. Give him the room to come home.




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