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Hope you will enjoy this
Contributed by
sidra
on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 12:27:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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An indescribable urge
a terrible desire
to make a cut
that burns like fire
a sickening sensation
a trembling hand
a fearful tear
a cry for help
that no one can hear
a whimper of pain
as the red river flows
down my wrists to spill on my toes
an empty soul
with nowhere to turn
no one to understand
no one willing to learn
shameful thoughts
as i do it again
all i need now is one true friend.
Copyright ©
sidra
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2004-02-14 12:27:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hope you will enjoy this
(User Rating: 1 ) by sapphire2589 on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 12:38:15 PM AEST (User
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i really like this poem,um the only"help" that i can offer is that in the last line"all i need now is one true friend"it might be more "powerful" if you just had"all i need is one true friend" like thats all you ever needed.
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