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Forever Yours
Contributed by
slayer_015
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Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 03:26:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I look at you,and see my heart,
Unloosed,unchained,and torn apart.
This love I see and feel in you,
I take and hold,what can I do?
Within your eyes,I see your soul,
Soft and gentle,like the first winter snow.
Love's first kiss has cast her spell,
So there I will be and there I will dwell.
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2004-02-14 03:26:27]
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Re: Forever Yours
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by Steb3544 on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 03:34:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful :) keep up the good work
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Re: Forever Yours
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 08:00:22 AM AEST
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Very romantic and sweet...just perfect for Valentines Day...great poem with a nice flow to it...your delivery was awesome!
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