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one i so adored
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 12:29:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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has it been a hundred years my love,
since i last breathed your name?
will it be one hundred more until i feel your touch again?
am i a fool to love like this and
remember the bliss in your sweet kiss?
would i do it all again if i knew,
how much i would be missing you?
the sun no longer holds its shine,
the days long gone when you were mine,
my hearts in pieces on the forest floor,
your lips have left me wanting more,
you were the one i so adored.
~:*:~
:
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ladyfawn
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Re: one i so adored
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by Shadow on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 12:41:11 AM AEST
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| Beauty is abound in this poem. It speaks of a question that plagues many people and that is what If. Good write! |
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Re: one i so adored
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by emystar on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:10:03 AM AEST
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Very good my dear sweet friend.
Awesome even in the sadness.....the beauty shines thru.....
Hang tuff my frienda nad keep um comming.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: one i so adored
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:22:03 AM AEST
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| AAWW Beautifully sad,So much feeling in this! Christina |
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Re: one i so adored
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by jaavys on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:35:40 AM AEST
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| wow! this is very good. very good. you are reaching, but more importantly you are getting there. Where is there you ask? where our poetry meets. |
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Re: one i so adored
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by venkat on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 04:34:48 AM AEST
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Beautifully romantic..these lines are powerful.."the sun no longer holds its shine,
the days long gone when you were mine,
my hearts in pieces on the forest floor....."
great write..hugs my friend. venkat
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Re: one i so adored
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 05:57:56 AM AEST
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| Short and sweet, but filled with so much emotion ... beautiful write Nessa ... Jan |
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Re: one i so adored
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 06:01:36 AM AEST
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bittersweet pulls at the heartstrings
Shari |
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Re: one i so adored
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by Kie on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 03:06:26 PM AEST
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| You touched my heart deeply with this one. Kie |
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Re: one i so adored
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 09:49:23 AM AEST
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ouch...hurts just to read this nessa...maybe cause I relate a bit too well ;o)
Roses
Larry |
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Re: one i so adored
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:21:21 AM AEST
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ooh i never knew you cared! another great write
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Re: one i so adored
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:01:56 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this was such a wonderful read. I applaud you my friend. Your talent is excellent. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: one i so adored
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by Alovinmann on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:06:50 PM AEST
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| You really have it!!! |
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Re: one i so adored
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 10:18:26 AM AEST
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Awe, Ness. Big hugs to you.
This is both heartbreaking and beautiful.
Lovely tribute.
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