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The life that night claimed
Contributed by
Shadow
on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 11:40:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Hold my angel and don’t let go
He whispered and the wind would blow
Huddled by the small fire
As the winds went higher
Is this the end the poor man thought
After all the time he’d fought
The rages he wares let’s end the cold
Death announces it’s strong hold
He holds his little dog near
He holds it tight and is filled with fear
He doesn’t want to die
He lets go one last sigh
So short a life that now does end
Upon the streets filled with sin
A smile does now grace his face
He has gone to a better place
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Shadow
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2004-02-13 23:40:55]
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Re: The life that night claimed
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 12:16:01 AM AEST
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| awww! what a vividly image filled poem, so sad, beautiful job, im very moved, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The life that night claimed
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 01:50:37 AM AEST
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Hi shadow,
this is a very moving poem.
very good write heart felt.
keep them coming. |
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Re: The life that night claimed
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:06:04 AM AEST
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Very heartfelt write....
Jenni |
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