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Broken Childhood.
Contributed by
trhpeanut
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 09:32:23 PM in AEST
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You left me standing there
Alone.
No armour on.
You left me wondering who I was.
All on my own.
You took my Body,
Tore it in half
You took my childhood
my heart and my laugh
You took everything
I kept for myself...
And now, you're gone!
I'm not your poor thing
It happens to other people
You say How sad.
You say Poor thing.
When it's you it's something else.
It's everything.
You'll never believe the nightmares
You'll never know the pain you caused.
You'll never see the scars you left.
The things you stole.
Everythings A loss
You took my Body,
Tore it in half
You took my childhood
my heart and my laugh
You took everything
I kept for myself...
And now, you're gone!
I'm not your poor thing
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trhpeanut
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Re: Broken Childhood.
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 09:44:47 PM AEST
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a truly heart-breaking poem..... it is so.... what is the word for it?...... so evil or mean or cruel of some people knows only how to use their mouths to gain others trust and after they gets it, they turned around and throw it away like dust..... may be that is just the part of fun for them... to hurt people..... so bad.....
Nice poem, I like how you use that repeat sentences.
'You took my Body,
Tore it in half
You took my childhood
my heart and my laugh
You took everything
I kept for myself...
And now, you're gone!
I'm not your poor thing' |
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Re: Broken Childhood.
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by Arymes on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 10:23:06 PM AEST
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| Achingly beautiful in its honesty and emotion. It's difficult to share a tragic event in our lives in poetry, especially if it's something that most people, thankfully, do not have to endure. To be able to convey the sense of loss of innocence and purity and to help the reader understand that loss is the reason poetry exists. You have performed admirably and you have my thanks. |
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Re: Broken Childhood.
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by BloodyValentine on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 03:06:42 PM AEST
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| An emotional poem that sparks a tear. I can relate to that poem in so many ways, always being ragged on & pushed around. That was awsome. You got skills "trhpeanut". |
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Re: Broken Childhood.
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by Trhpeanut on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 06:48:06 PM AEST
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thank y'all very much...and Btw, my name is Tiffany. Or you can call me by any nicknames you can think of...i really don't give a crap. well, i give a crap about what you think about me...but not about the name- oh, you get it!. AGH! the penguins are attacking! gotta go!
Peace out and rawk on,
Tiffles |
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