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old current
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:45:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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it makes me cry to see you rejected again.
why do you chase the ones who don't appreciate?
they don't know you
they don't care
whilst i sit and stewed here,
despising every empty second lost...
guessing, waiting
calling, losing
another race.
no habits broken, i see.
Crest-fallen. Feel me as that old current that kept you going a while. Why can't you ride one wave forever?
Ok, a perfect circle can only possibly be drawn free-hand if you're insane
but don't you think we were close?
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dolly_dagger
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2004-02-13 19:45:34]
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Re: old current
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:50:26 PM AEST
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This is awesome.. I understand it perfectly
"Ok, a perfect circle can only possibly be drawn free-hand if you're insane"
lol... loved that line. :)
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Re: old current
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by Tichawangana on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:32:33 AM AEST
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| Nothing cryptic about this Dolly. Go get him and keep writing! |
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Re: old current
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 07:22:03 PM AEST
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| i get this. this is exsacly how i write, or think or, something, i dunno, but i understand it. its good =) |
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