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Quintessential Me
Contributed by
AzurePaladin
on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 06:44:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Silently beautiful
My avatar, she is who I
Most want to emulate
Whose scars only add to her beauty
Strong and solitary
Influential in her own gentle way
Unimposing and undeniable
Looney, love inspiring
She who shines light upon the
Melancholy and doubt of darkness
Reflecting and complimentary
She, not a member of any constellation
But welcomed to dwell in all constellations
She, of grace and peace
She, my quintessential me
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AzurePaladin
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2004-02-13 18:44:21]
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Re: Quintessential Me
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by sarah_1600 on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:04:08 PM AEST
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Wow! Great poem! you definitely have a way with words. I think it sounds great! My poems never flow that well!
Sarah |
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Re: Quintessential Me
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by Kie on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:11:30 PM AEST
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| I think it is awesome! Kie |
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Re: Quintessential Me
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 11:45:25 PM AEST
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| beautiful! keep writing! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Quintessential Me
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 01:16:57 AM AEST
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| Nice job. But does "looney" fit with the overall feel? |
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Re: Quintessential Me
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by geoffreyalanbest on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 11:16:54 AM AEST
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| I like how you showed a true identity that is hidden. One that is not but should be. She holds to your true self that is inside. Great work in flow word choice, neatly constructed to led to the end. |
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Re: Quintessential Me
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by Ethereal_Engine on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:46:16 PM AEST
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| w00t! this one's much lighter then the others, you did well in describing your-self ^^. "Unimposing and undeniable looney, love inspiring" I especially like the last couple of lines "She, not a member of any constelation but welcomed to dwell in all constellations" like Your Perfect Sky I can relate to that line. I am never and was never in the "main circle" of any group of people. Im always the person many people know, respect, and will talk to on ocassion while not involved with thier groups. I have many aquatiances, many people that would stop and say hey, but few that I can really call friend. I think your writing is good, well thought out and poetic. |
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