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Alone
Contributed by
pyrochick
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 06:01:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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i feel alone
like part of me is still searching for a home
i have nothing to laugh about
nor to cry about
i mope around looking for someone
to share all this with but i find no one
i'm sitting in a room
with nothing but a broom
this is called life?
to me it's nothing but passing time
time going on not waiting for no one
i'm just a speck of dust
i have nothing but lonliness to comfort me in the night
all i want is to find someone
to hold me tight and make things right
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2004-02-13 18:01:18]
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Re: Alone
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by Necromant on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:30:49 PM AEST
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Oh how I can relate to this one! I loved the way you've written it! Its so sad and to be honest is how I feel most of the time, Great write!!
Anne :D |
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Re: Alone
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by Avis_Nigra on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:03:28 PM AEST
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Honestly, I have picked to read this one for I have written one of the same titel myself, and I liked how you put the topic, may the reason for such poetry be gone soon.
AN |
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Re: Alone
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 09:23:43 PM AEST
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| my boyfriend of three years left me today.. I feel you I feel every word, the words I could not find thank you. |
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Re: Alone
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by Angelica on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 09:42:15 PM AEST
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| This poem may me feel sad for narrator... i like the line "this is called life?" |
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