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This Is For You.
Contributed by
sweet-poison
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:09:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This is for you.
The one who brands me a fool.
This is for you.
The one who I apparently loved.
Just two days ago.
You told me you loved me.
Of course you did.
This is for you.
Now you tell me.
That you love another.
I'd take pleasure in discovering.
What you consider as love.
A game to be played perhaps.
And me the subject.
And her the prize.
You played me well.
I hope your happy.
I hope she makes you smile.
Afterall she won your heart.
Not me.
I suppose I didnt make you happy.
I suppose you hated me really.
Though I didnt hate you.
I loved you.
Zoe you said her name was.
I guess she doesnt know about me.
Maybe your ashamed.
I wouldnt blame you.
In fact.
I do blame you.
I blame you for making me love you.
And this is for you.
This is for you.
The one that I love.
This is for you.
And now you will never know.
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sweet-poison
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2004-02-13 16:09:15]
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Re: This Is For You.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:17:21 PM AEST
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| That is really deep. Im guessing he was all you wanted him to be and more. I know how u feel. You could have kept going and going, and it would have kept me reading until the end. Im going to keep an eye out for more of your work! |
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Re: This Is For You.
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:32:51 PM AEST
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You know, that is always the problem- people use the word 'LOVE' too often and too easily, and abused the true holy meaning of it! But oh well, if that is the kinda person he is, then he is not worthy of your love.... just let him get on with it, and one day he might regret!
Nice poem, but as I said, he ain't worth it....^_^ |
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Re: This Is For You.
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by Necromant on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:37:45 PM AEST
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*Sniff* Oh this one is so full of pain and bitterness, I'm really sorry for you...The poem is amazing it really describes your feelings well, he must have made you hurt a lot, hope he'll read it! Great write! And keep writing great talent!
Anne :D |
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Re: This Is For You.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 09:14:19 PM AEST
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aww this is very sad.. I can understand how you feel.. it sux when love is unreturned.. I hope you get over this soon.. great write though..
Peace
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Re: This Is For You.
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 02:16:31 AM AEST
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love does not exist but I am sorry for your perceived loss of love. That has happened to me, but now I know that love does not exist and have woken from my blindness I will be hurt less. I did like yer poem however which was brimming w ith sadness and anger.
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