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Rose of Solitude
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:12:07 PM in AEST
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A Rose doth sit upon thee tonight
Gentle as it emits such perfection
Red as the deep velvet heart
You gave to me that day
A Rose doth sit upon thee tonight
Carressing every whisper near
A fallen petal of love so strong
Like a stone within my soul
A Rose doth sit upon thee tonight
A memory of our times together
Im sorry i could not save thee that day
A regret not even a rose could reverse
A Rose doth sit upon thee tonight
Watching over lifeless love
A grave of romance left for you
I dug from the soil of passion
A Rose doth sit upon thee tonight
Each tear i cry a breath of life
Year in year out a new rose sits
On this day called valentines
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forever_lonely
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2004-02-13 13:12:07]
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Re: Rose of Solitude
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by Putteragain on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:40:51 PM AEST
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love it I am so blessed to be posting my stuff with poets such as yourself
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Re: Rose of Solitude
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by Necromant on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:48:23 PM AEST
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Oh what a tragic poem! So sad! *sniff* Loved this one! Lately you're posting a lot of amazing poems! Can't keep track lol, you are very talented, poetry pour out of you neaturally! KEep it up!
Anne :D |
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Re: Rose of Solitude
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 11:22:35 PM AEST
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| ohhhh this is so lovely and heartbreakingly forlorn, oh my, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Rose of Solitude
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:10:50 AM AEST
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| Aww...this was so beautiful. Absolutely sweet. :) |
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Re: Rose of Solitude
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 02:03:30 AM AEST
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firstly I loved the title secondly the constant allusions to valentines gets a wee bit tiresome. Your poem was still good despite that.
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Re: Rose of Solitude
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 05:43:06 AM AEST
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Luke....I have been looking forward to your posts with great anxiety. This one caught me off guard, in a good way. I haven't seen you do a lot of fee-verse writing, and found your words both piercing and somber. Keep up the fantastic work, 'cause I want more! More I say!
Truly,
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