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Would You Notice Me?
Contributed by
jazz
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:10:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If I could leap up and touch the sky,
If I would always break down and cry,
If I could tie the perfect tie,
would you notice me?
If I brushed my hair a different way,
If I always knew the right words to say,
If I got down on my knees to pray,
would you notice me?
If I could make a sick child well,
If I could shout with the loudest yell,
If to the devil my soul I could sell,
would you notice me?
If I painted my nails and shiny, bright pink,
If I could tell the thoughts you think,
if my eyes changed colors everytime I blinked,
would you notice me?
I would try these things, don't you see?
But I definitely won't beg and plead.
Someday, maybe mine you will be.
Until then, I'll wish you'd notice me.
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jazz
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Re: Would You Notice Me?
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by harmoni on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:29:07 PM AEST
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| NICE POEM |
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Re: Would You Notice Me?
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by Kie on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:00:58 PM AEST
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| I could relate to this, I have been there. You have so much talent and you express yourself really well. I liked this one alot. ((5)) all the way! Kie |
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Re: Would You Notice Me?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:06:19 PM AEST
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Lovely write...can identify..
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Re: Would You Notice Me?
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 10:54:31 PM AEST
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| awww! how sweet!! i hope that that special one does notice you, maybe if you trip into them *something i would do* lol, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Would You Notice Me?
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 07:48:19 PM AEST
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Nice write sweetie ! Loved the "If my eyes changed colors everytime I blinked,would you notice me".I as well can relate and it's nice to know that a person's poetry can somehow become a friend of ours,someone who is living the same period and telling us we're not alone.Nicely done,
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