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Without You
Contributed by
ronald
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A life without the colours of the rainbow,
A life without the bright glorious sunshine,
A life without the clear blue skies,
A life without the purest of joy,
It is a life without you,
With only remnants of emptiness,
Becoming the sole resident of my soul...
Without you,
Without the beads of your sweat,
Without the pillar of your support,
Without the backbone of your ideas,
Without the utterance of your advice,
Dreams and visions will remain distant,
Through the ages ahead...
And now, here I am with a simple poem,
And I would just like to say,
How precious you are in my sight,
And I do cherish your existence,
In the life that I'm living now...
Just keep in mind,
Without you...
There will be...
No now...
Copyright ©
ronald
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2004-02-13 12:11:03]
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Re: Without You
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by ksprincess42004 on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:23:32 PM AEST
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| This is a sweet poem. Good job. |
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Re: Without You
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by Kie on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 03:22:16 PM AEST
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| I second that, very sweet! Kie |
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Re: Without You
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:32:31 AM AEST
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| It's great to see a you back Ronald!! And with such an awesome poem. :) |
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Re: Without You
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by nagina on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:53:11 AM AEST
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| I love your poems! This one is very sweet, and very well written. Keep writting great poems! Thank you for your comments on my poetry. I cant wait to see some more of your work! |
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Re: Without You
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:35:44 PM AEST
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A very beautifull write that any lady would be happy to get on Valentines or any other day.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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