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Valentine's Day For The Lonely
Contributed by
blueheart
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:28:51 AM in AEST
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The world wrapped in its heavenly bliss,
Striking entwined souls with magic and mist,
Oblivious to reality they walk by and kiss,
Plundering others into lonliness so deep.
Too bad this year its still me, myself and I,
Sitting in the midst of shadows trying not to cry,
A tinge of jealousy at the starry eyed,
Lying solo counting the hours rolling by.
The lovestruck people, they're floating on air,
Skipping on the clouds, dancing without a care,
The crimson visuals engulfing me with pain,
This years Valentines will be nothing but the same.
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by blueheart on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:30:20 AM AEST
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Sorry, I was a bit careless. The title should be Valentine's Day for the Lonely. My mistake.
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:50:52 AM AEST
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This is really Hawaii06....Good poem..I know how both ends of that go!
Jamie.... |
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:05:55 AM AEST
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| Aw, Hanna....*hugs* Chin up. Go to a singles bash (they're having plenty of them here this year) or something, you might get lucky and hook up with someone *wink* |
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by PoloRM on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 11:20:27 AM AEST
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I haven't commented in almost half a year, but heh this poem is for me.
Too bad I won't be alone. I'll be spending my valentine with a 4 hours math exam on Saturday morn'.
Thanks for putting my feelings into this poem, i wouldn't have done it any better (besides I don't even have time to anyway :P) |
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by forever_lonely on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:29:08 PM AEST
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awww this is sweet, i wont be spending valentines day alone, im working 10 hours from 12 till 10, and 3 days later its me and my girlfriends 2 year anniversary of going out, and shes working all day lol
Great poem really hit a soft spot for me when i was younger for i was the same,
keep your chin up hun and maybe go to a singles bash like in the comment earlier you never know what might happen teehee ;)
Luke |
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by orangeangel on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:36:34 PM AEST
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| great poem. |
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by Kie on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 06:48:47 PM AEST
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| I liked this one alot. Kie |
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by Necromant on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:02:16 PM AEST
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Hey blueheart, thanks for this poem! Its amazing! I loved it a lot, very well described! Keep it up!
Anne :D |
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by Stalkee on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 10:41:19 PM AEST
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| I'm in your boat, all alone on valentines....again, heh...good write |
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:29:01 AM AEST
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| me too *has fallen off her cloud* hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 11:21:43 PM AEST
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| Hey, don't be so sad, pal... I'm sure you will have better Valentines Day ahead. Believe that someday you'll find your Mr. Right ;-) cya! Great poem! |
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 05:26:10 AM AEST
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Very good write as I too can relate. Course I spent Valentines day here with my global family so I wasn't lonely this year.
Luv your style as you go right straite 2 the heart even if you're sad the poetry is awesome!
Keep up your good work!
luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: Valentine's Day For The Lonely
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:14:47 PM AEST
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I like the title. This poem I can really relate to because I have felt exactly the way you put it. Your words drop heavenly.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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