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A fairy tale gone wrong
Contributed by
echomywurdz
on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:38:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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We were the perfect couple
It seemed like we were together for ever
we didn't think anything would ever tare us apart
we weren't just in love with each other...
we loved each other
it was just me...me and my man
two people so in love they we inseparable
spent day and night together
after a while you would think we would run out of things to talk about
but no...not us we were different
we could just sit and cuddle for hours and talk
and they called it puppy-love but we knew they were wrong
it was the real thing
but then one day something unexpectedly happened
it was a fairy-tale gone wrong
he came to me one day...
eyes so teary
he said he had to leave town
and me not knowing clearly what he meant just said "OK, when will you be back?"
and then he broke those heart taring words to me
he said "I'm sorry...but this time i wont return"
i tyred my hardest not to cry...but i couldn't help it
and that was the day i lost my love
he told me that him and his family had to move
he begged to stay but there was nothing more he could do...
i understood...as much as i didn't want this to happen...it still was going to
and then we decided to do the hardest thing in the world
he was leaving and i would be left behind
and as much as i loved him...i didn't want to hold him back
and as much as he loved me...he had to let me free
so we both sat there
tears violently running down our cheeks
as he held me tight and we told each other how much we loved one another
and he said he could never forget me and that we would always keep in touch
and at that moment we broke up because i knew he would find someone else where he was going
as much as he loved me it was bound to happen
and he knew that i would need someone near me to, not knowing he would always be
so we spent our last night together...
half the time spent just wiping away tears
and at that time we knew how it felt to know longer be living...
so dead inside
and then the next day when he left we cryed our hearts out
it was our first day alone in years
but when he got to where he was going he called me right away
and we talked forever...or so it seemed
and this went on daily for days
and then those days turned to months
and then those months turned to years
but then one day he didn't call
and one day went on to two
and sooner two became three
and never again did i hear his voice
and i thought this meant that he just found someone new
but no...he never could...and neither could i
he killed himself because he couldn't live without me
and after i was just finally starting to recover
i was dead inside once again
then i realized i couldn't take anymore pain...
i killed myself that night because i couldn't live without him
and hours later i met him in the sky at those great golden gates
and though we left so many others in that pain we couldn't take
we had to be together again forever and no one could tear us apart
though on different nights...
and different times
we had killed ourselves never to return
and we did this all...
for the LOVE
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echomywurdz
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2004-02-13 01:38:15]
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Re: A fairy tale gone wrong
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by sapphire2589 on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 02:39:27 AM AEST
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| wow,thats sad,amazingly written,good job,i love it |
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Re: A fairy tale gone wrong
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by CountryGirl on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:52:19 AM AEST
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| No words can explain what I felt when I read this. I can only say that tears sprang up from no where and fell they did. |
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