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Secrets and lies
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:58:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Secrets and lies
inside the darkest places
within your soul they hide
Nagging and haunting
to come out to the open
Each day living on is
harder than your last
These secrets you will carry to your grave
You cannot feel secure until they lie to rest
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2004-02-13 00:58:34]
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Re: Secrets and lies
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:26:43 AM AEST
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haunting hard way to live bottling all that stuff inside but seems like alot of people do this all the time makes one wonder how well we really know someone Im finding out the hard way.
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Re: Secrets and lies
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by niki on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 05:09:31 PM AEST
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i thought it was really good
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Re: Secrets and lies
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by Necromant on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:10:02 PM AEST
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I think its very good! It has a lot of truthful meaning! I liked it! Great write!
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Re: Secrets and lies
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by arden on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 10:07:07 PM AEST
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i thought it was great, awesome write. look forward to more of your work
Arden |
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Re: Secrets and lies
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:58:50 PM AEST
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| I think it's good. People shouldn't keep their emotions bottled up. You did an excellent job. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Secrets and lies
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:19:07 PM AEST
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| true, but they make interesting poetry:P hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Secrets and lies
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:21:47 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem. Sometimes things pop into your head that turn out to be marvelous! |
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Re: Secrets and lies
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:29:41 PM AEST
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I think it's good. Once again you display a comand not only of the written word but of the thruth and at times the unforseen hurt these words tell of. Great writting as usual your in true poetic form.
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