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Scornful love
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:56:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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IS there a way to mend loves Scorn
of a deceitful heart?
Can one go on from all the pain or
does ones charred ashy soul remain
from the aftermath of it all?
Do you hear the lonely calls of all the fallen?
Do you sit and wonder why and what reason?
The answer to me is some shall never mend or find the hope to carry on they burn out and fade away
their worlds are endless shambles etched in black and gray they know not love but are decayed
JENNA
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2004-02-13 00:56:23]
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Re: Scornful love
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:41:49 AM AEST
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Good job here
Shows much wisdom.
luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: Scornful love
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by arden on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 10:38:22 PM AEST
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very good. i really like this. good work!
Arden |
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Re: Scornful love
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 09:53:43 PM AEST
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| Jenna, I'm sure there is a way to mend love in some way or another. Nice write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Scornful love
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:23:32 AM AEST
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| Great write! Very complex questions entered in your poem. |
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