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Feeling Low
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:52:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You make me feel
so misplaced when you deny me of love's embrace
You make me beg
on my knees
Shouting out a thousand pleas
You make me gray
when you won't listen to what I really need to say
You make me keep up that wall
from what could be the greatest love of all
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2004-02-13 00:52:44]
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Re: Feeling Low
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by Kie on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 02:08:08 AM AEST
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| I liked this one alot. Loved the ending. Kie |
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Re: Feeling Low
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by arden on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 03:20:09 PM AEST
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very good! i very much enjoyed it. keep it up
Arden |
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Re: Feeling Low
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:37:23 PM AEST
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| Yes,the games we have to play to protect ourselfs do wear us down.I feel you on this one. |
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Re: Feeling Low
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:25:14 AM AEST
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| I absolutely love how you turn your short poems into powerful life experiences! good write |
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