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The Knife (Mind And Metal)
Contributed by
Emmie74
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Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 07:13:33 AM in AEST
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It slices through my flesh
So slowly
Some wince at the pain
I for one don't
It brings comfort
No matter how hurtful it can be
It brings me safety
Even though its a thing of danger
Red crimson blood drips
So slowly
Death is so close
All I have to do is press harder
Cut faster
Some people notice
I'm not sure they know
That deep inside
I'm the person I could never be
Inside is so different
Than this mask I keep
Inside is turmoil
Confusion beyond the worst
Cutting is the only way
To keep me in reality
Without a sharp edge
I don't know what I would do
Maybe jump off a building
It does seem tempting
I'll keep it in mind
Am I the only one
That thinks this way?
Am I the only one
That thinks cutting is reality?
I just might be
But everyones different
All I need now
Are my friends
"The Three"
And all the rest
If I lose you now
Who knows where I will go
Maybe into a hole to rot
Like I've been told to do
I need support
Through this time of chaos
Just stand by me
I'll never let you go
*To all my friends, I love you guys.
And just remember that if I really wanted to die,
I'll just shoot myself.
I could never do that to any of you, hence me being alive*
Copyright ©
Emmie74
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2002-07-14 07:13:33]
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Re: The Knife (Mind And Metal)
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 06:10:05 PM AEST
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I love you too....The Three will always be here for you...even if I feel like running! You'll always come first, I hope you know that.
Love always,
Dee |
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Re: The Knife (Mind And Metal)
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 11:48:21 AM AEST
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| This is really good. These are my feelings too. The razor is so comforting. |
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Re: The Knife (Mind And Metal)
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 11:48:21 AM AEST
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| This is really good. These are my feelings too. The razor is so comforting. |
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Re: The Knife (Mind And Metal)
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by Jilli_bean on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 10:23:28 PM AEST
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| well....done...good job ..i loved the point of view ..i just wish other people could see it ..and at least try to understand..wat is driving ppl to comfort of other things ...well n e way ..well done...once again... |
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