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LA series part 5
Contributed by
merry
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 10:22:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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cold version of the same story
retold without glory she said
the same thing over and over again
until he lost his mind and left
to find some other version
of the same story with a different cover
he said LA was a place for lovers
to discover the universe
she thought he was a movie mogul
turned out she was wrong
and cut him lose to practice zen
so he sat in the coffee shop all afternoon
trying to recall where he went wrong
but nothing ever made sense to him anymore
until that waitress took him home
after all she knew better than to expect too much
with him standing on the corner looking lost
a nice tush and broad shoulders
what more could a girl want
with his cowboy hat in hand
he followed her to the hills that night
a shabby little bungalow with an overgrown yard
she undressed for him in the fading light
he fell in love with her story
and hearing her tell it
she was the perfect leading lady
gmm 2004
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merry
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Re: LA series part 5
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 10:26:18 PM AEST
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| Hmmm, nice poem story. Very vivid hope you keep writing. regards Wes... |
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Re: LA series part 5
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:12:03 PM AEST
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| I like this. Am going to read the previous four now. |
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Re: LA series part 5
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by Necromant on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:22:58 PM AEST
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Oh what a story!!! I loved the way you described it! Next time I'll read the others, great write!! Keep it up!!
Anne :D |
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