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Fate of Anger
Contributed by
Yodo
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Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:56:01 PM in AEST
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Embittered and embroiled
Fanatic views of all the world,
She sits alone in her dark room
Weaving at her eternal loom.
Together are Judgement and Justice
Hers and hers alone to posess.
All the world waits by in her room
While she weaves at her imortal loom.
She doesn't respect or care for man
They're only a tool in her master plan.
All the while her distorted doom
Is written with her endless loom.
All she has is a single thought
Upon herself things thing was brought
And everything will make her fume
While she weaves at her useless loom.
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Yodo
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Re: Fate of Anger
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 10:04:56 PM AEST
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great poem
it was a good read |
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Re: Fate of Anger
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by Yodo on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 10:13:16 PM AEST
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Ehm, thanks. Whoever you were.
It's about anger and we let it take over our mind. Dark room = angry mind/heart.
The loom are the thoughts, and the woman is the anger itself. Loom is another word for the feeling of something hanging over you, ready to crush you, as well as something withwhich you weave fabric. Your thoughts lead to your actions, and your actions loom over you waiting happen. This waiting to happen is the fate.
What you weave, you will sew, so to speak. Pardon the play on words. But I think it aptly describes what anger does to us. It's better to open the door, tell anger to get out, and resolve to be patient, kind, gentle, and meek in all situations. It leads to fresh clean cloth, that you may sew and wear without looking like a bent-over hag. Eh? |
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Re: Fate of Anger
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 10:35:18 PM AEST
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| very nice write. check out my latest...bye Wes... |
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Re: Fate of Anger
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by JusMeOtay on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:13:04 AM AEST
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Yodo...
this is awesome...one of my favs...awesome words...and i love the arrangement...wish i could dig as deep as you. Great write pal....when you gonna get a book out!?
*jeni* |
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