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Now your gone
Contributed by
Shadow
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:42:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When she left my life was done
Reality shattered like hit by a gun
Where once was heaven now lies hell
The only place I had to dwell
It hurt me when you left me sitting there
I wonder now did you even care
I fell in love now who’s to blame
Damn my heart and your sick game
I feel among the many dead
Did you even lift you head
No you didn’t even care
This pain is too much to bear
You said you loved me so I believed your lie
Now I wish to god I could die
Left alone out of place
And you’re gone without a trace
The roses I bought lay on the floor
Left outside your angelic door
I want to know did you care
Or do they still simply lie there
Copyright ©
Shadow
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2004-02-12 21:42:35]
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Re: Now your gone
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:46:34 PM AEST
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| Beautiful piece, the imagery of roses being thrown away is so like a broken heart. Hope you're not feeling this way on Valentine's Day. |
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Re: Now your gone
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 10:16:04 PM AEST
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| Very well written. beautiful wording. |
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Re: Now your gone
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:12:00 AM AEST
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very sad and touching write.. left me in awe.. I can understand this feeling.. it sux when love isn't returned or ignored.. beatiful write!
Peace
JENNA |
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