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Simply, I love you
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:18:32 PM in AEST
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Last thing at night, before I close my eyes to end the day
I watch you safe in slumber
The calm of dreamtime washing over you
In the dark you are my guiding light
Eyes open, I am living my dream
Unsure at first to invest my heart in you
Tentative steps, I was a small child learning to walk
The seed planted in unfamiliar ground
Nurtured by feelings flowing through your heart to mine
Has given me true purpose, allowed me to grow
We laugh in the face of another raging storm
Waltz through each day in the great dance of life
Fires of adversity cooled by our togetherness
Hold my hand tightly, never let me go
Never let anything divide the whole
With you I am the calmest sea
The most dazzling ray of golden sun
Without you I am hollow
A husk, empty of feelings inside
Dried up, left to be reclaimed by an unforgiving world
Last thing tonight, before I close my eyes to end another perfect day
I will watch you smile, my peaceful angel sleeping
I will kiss your cheek softly, not to wake you
Rest my head carefully against you
And in the morning as light sparkles your eyes, tell you simply, I love you
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Re: Simply, I love you
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by Remy on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:36:31 PM AEST
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| Pwa!! This is absolutely gorgeous!! |
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Re: Simply, I love you
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by Kie on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:38:25 PM AEST
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| You made me smile, this was wonderful. Kie |
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Re: Simply, I love you
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:24:37 AM AEST
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gorgeous yes... I'd have to agree.
Awesome! |
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Re: Simply, I love you
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by Aika on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:48:37 AM AEST
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Oh, dear!!
SO so so lovely..
i am with you:-) love, aika:-) |
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Re: Simply, I love you
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:10:38 AM AEST
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I could feel the love you have for her
Terrific poem
So full of love
Love Sweet angel ukxxx
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Re: Simply, I love you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 08:08:36 AM AEST
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| Yes such sentiment expressed in your words, very moving, a depth of emotion expressed...........wonderful read........<br />
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Dee xx |
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Re: Simply, I love you
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 02:34:04 PM AEST
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| awww! so sweet and loving!! my best to you, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Simply, I love you
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by genuine on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:24:07 AM AEST
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| BEAUTIFUL.....thats about all I can say:) |
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Re: Simply, I love you
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by WinterFawn on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:48:36 AM AEST
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Such a soft and dreamy verse!.... The romance here is very heartwarming...Simply beautiful....
WinterFawn |
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