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Sold
Contributed by
putteragain
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Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 05:39:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Neglected child so innocent
left out in the cold
struck down with a fist
for not doing what your told
dinners just some dried up bread
with crust full of mold
Jesus heres you pray each night
to have a mom to hold
all grown up in memories
you think now im bold
why did you do it mommy
your baby you had sold
michelle
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Re: Sold
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:21:36 PM AEST
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| Sadly, It does happen. Good poem. |
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Re: Sold
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:21:52 AM AEST
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That's so sad, and unfortunately true. You made me think about a lot, Michelle. Very good poem, albeit sad.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Sold
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by forever_lonely on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:32:54 PM AEST
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So sad and so unfortunately true
a truely amazing write and gives great reflection on a terrible subject
Great write
Luke x |
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Re: Sold
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:43:55 PM AEST
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The poems God gives us are the most touching.
Stitch |
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