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So Young
Contributed by
ZooYork_Chick
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Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:47:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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we live to make our mark upon this world,
but instead it leaves its mark on us,
we hurry through, so unaware,
then suddenly, when layed out bare,
unfolded to it all we are,
so young,
yet shown so much;
for when at first we had believed,
we were the ones not to recieve,
but instead we felt that we could give,
so young,
such little life to live.
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2004-02-12 15:47:28]
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Re: So Young
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by Remy on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:53:17 PM AEST
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dang... true true, we are in a bit of a hurry these days! erg, man this thing you wrote gave me a mind-job!! awesome!
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Re: So Young
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:38:22 PM AEST
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I certainly agree about the world leaving its mark on us.
Seems such a bad world sometimes too, if you let it then it taints you with its evil. |
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