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Anywhere
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:37:13 PM in AEST
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oops
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I'm writing this
I can take it anywhere.
Break through these lines on my paper to a place of retreat...
maybe drift along the ocean and stop in those places.
'Those' places.
I might even drift along the oceans of you....
Where we were yesterday,
seems so different from where we are today and things always look so different
in the daytime.
And you,
u u u u u u u u u u u u u u u u u u u u u
are a scarcity.
I've met none other like u,
is this traditional? Normal?
Or have I been made into a conformist?
I'm writing this
I can take it anywhere...
as long as its within the borders of sanity....
Copyright ©
broken-glass
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2004-02-12 15:37:13]
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Re: Anywhere
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:40:52 PM AEST
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| touching and enjoyed |
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Re: Anywhere
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:58:36 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading that. That was really interesting and got me thinking. |
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Re: Anywhere
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 08:48:34 PM AEST
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:) the lines on the paper reminds me of the 'your shoes' insanity. that inspired me, too. i just cldn't figure out how 2 use it.
ellie xxxxxx |
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