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white dove
Contributed by
loopylou
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Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:04:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i sit in the city
with my special poetry book
oh where oh where for inspiration shall i look?
then i see it
i look at it in awe
a white dove the most beautiful bird of all
it fills me with a sadness
for this beautiful bird will turn grey
if from the city's pollution if it does not stray
some will say that in a past life we were all white doves
flying in the sky and looking from above
but are flight of freedom has to end
as us doves land so gracefully on the dirty earths floor...
the beautiful dove no longer flies but crawls
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loopylou
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2004-02-12 15:04:21]
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Re: white dove
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:30:17 PM AEST
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| great poem |
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Re: white dove
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by arden on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 05:05:12 PM AEST
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beautiful, i really enjoyed it, keep it up
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Re: white dove
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by Kie on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 05:33:59 PM AEST
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| I liked this one alot. Kie |
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