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When Will
Contributed by
asrealthefallen10
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 02:53:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When will be my last breath
And when will I be consumed by death
When will it be someone else’s turn to cry
When will I understand
When will the sands of time stop
And how many more times will I watch that ball drop
When will we stop counting the years
When will I stop leaving in fear
When will I shed my last tear
When will we finely take a better look in the mirror
I’ve become older
A little bolder
And time has passed me by
The ones I love
And all I trust
Could never be my serenity
I’ve become empty
That’s it simply
And I wish I was whole
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asrealthefallen10
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2004-02-12 14:53:29]
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Re: When Will
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:32:11 PM AEST
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sad poem but good
keep your head up |
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Re: When Will
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:37:11 PM AEST
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| Interesting. I loved the last line the most - such a simple request yet written with so much depth. That's alwys the way with words, isn't it? Well done. |
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