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My kids
Contributed by
niki
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 01:31:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My kids
the ones for which
my heart beats
when we see eachother
the excitement can be overwhelming
but then it is time to say goodbye
and the sadness sets in
my heart begins to ache
there fresh baby smells
stay with me
there words
are what i hear
and my head clears
and swims with nothing else
but thoughts of them.
Copyright ©
niki
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2004-02-12 13:31:37]
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Re: My kids
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by Robza171 on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 02:41:44 PM AEST
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| I really loved this! I take it you and your husband are divorced? Touching... |
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Re: My kids
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by Robza171 on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 02:42:32 PM AEST
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| I really loved this! It's really touching and your pain comes so strongly across... |
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Re: My kids
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by Coral on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:26:47 PM AEST
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nice write!!
filled with emotion.... hope everything
becomes well |
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