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Without you
Contributed by
bhav
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 12:35:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There are some people without whom life does seem worth living.
Will the stars shine in the same way, without you?
Will the flowers blossom in the same way, without you?
Will the summer, winter, fall be the same without you?
Will the moon that seems so close yet so far, without you?
Will there be a smile on my face, without you?
Will I be able to write poems, without you?
Life seems so dull, without you.
Will my dreams come true, without you?
Will I fall at every step, without you?
Will I feel overwhelmed when the sun is setting, without you?
Will I feel on the top of this world, without you?
Please do remember I am nothing but a rag doll without you.
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bhav
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2004-02-12 12:35:50]
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Re: Without you
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by Kie on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 01:27:35 PM AEST
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| Lots of questions asked in this poem. Wish I had the answers! Enjoyed reading this alot. Kie |
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Re: Without you
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by bhavnas on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:35:37 PM AEST
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| hi bhav ...just today i read a few of ur poems which were worth appreciating....this one comes with the same depth of emotions....a very romantic write ...beautiful.....bhavna |
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