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Nightmare '94'
Contributed by
L-Dee
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Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 11:41:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As the beast approached
the shadow of darkness
It tore away my soul
replacing it with emptiness
The thing floated over me
watching at my eyes
took them clean away
drying up all of my cries
Holding onto my heart
the devil tossed me into hell
twisting and toturing
my soul I did not sell
Voices came through my ears
tormenting my youthful mind
trying to shut it close
leaving the echo's far behind
Silence comes to all
evil surrrounding the air
the influence of the shadow
does anyone really care
Copyright ©
L-Dee
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2004-02-12 11:41:15]
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Re: Nightmare '94'
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 12:10:11 PM AEST
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| I care-and I hope you don't have any more bad dreams. Anyhow---I liked the poem, it rhymed good |
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Re: Nightmare '94'
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 01:37:35 PM AEST
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| If that's the 94rth time you've had that dream, I'd go see a doctor and get some sleeping pills! jeezo! |
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Re: Nightmare '94'
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by StarBeneathTheStairs on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 05:55:44 AM AEST
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| This poem is really good, I love it... but yeah, having 94 repetitive dreams is a bit worrisome.... |
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Re: Nightmare '94'
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by L-Dee on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:14:36 AM AEST
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| No '94' Stands for the year I suffered from this re-occuring dream. I should of made it clearer. Thanks for the comments |
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