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merry go round
Contributed by
merry
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:49:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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gleaning vision in a dream
of yesterdays and tomorrows
seamless breathing
moving forward
traveling
across and through
destined to discover truth
about self in silence
thoughts cascade
waterfall of memory
time and place
made a path for me
straight to the heart
time ends and begins
it simply is
a circle
and I keep going round
gmm 2004
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merry
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2004-02-12 09:49:49]
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Re: merry go round
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 10:18:09 AM AEST
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Oh, I like this. I can feel this. I can imagine how the words came to you. Wonderful!
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Re: merry go round
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:28:00 PM AEST
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| This is nice. I like it. |
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Re: merry go round
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by Spike on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 07:36:03 AM AEST
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M,
a confronting reflection that's for sure. Goes straight to the heart of self. Hopefully we can imagine different paths to take us off on tangents, but I agree, the main road leads back on itself, back to the same themes, issues, but hopefully a little wiser and reflective.
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