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Eaten alivesněden zaživa
Contributed by
Aika
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:30:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Walking through my life
Sunny paradise,
Here and there soft rain
To only refresh the earth
I have love and silver spoon
Angels with halo
Fate endowed me generously
And in real I am the king
Suddenly vultures only
pecking my body
I am their sustenance
Expelled from paradise
I suffer in this desert
My soul is gone
Devil´s dirty game
Burnt it like paper whole
For a bit of dimness
I did not see the light
Rain which was so needed
I thought was hell that time
I wanted to taste
Wine which was poison
I was too proud king of blindness
Now, I will be eaten alive
Kráčím si životem,
Rájem prosluněným
jen tu a tam sprchne
aby déšť zavlažil zemi
Mám lásku i blahobyt,
Anděly co maj svatozář
štědře mě osud vybavil
Já jsem vlastně král
Když jednoho dne
Spatřil jsem přízrak
Zvědavost mě táhla
Chtěl jsem ho poznat
R:
Najednou supi jen
Do mého těla klovají
jejich potravou jsem
a z ráje vyhnaný
V týhle poušti trpím
Duše má už není,
Satanova hříčka lehce
Spálila ji jak papír
pro trochu šera
neviděl jsem světlo
déšť který byl třeba
tenkrát mi připadal jak peklo
chtělo se mi ochutnat
vína, jenž bylo jedem
byl jsem pyšný král slepota
teď budu zaživa sněden
R:
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-02-12 09:30:36]
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Re: Eaten alivesněden zaživa
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:52:28 AM AEST
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Your friend should be pleased. Good stuff.
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Re: Eaten alivesněden zaživa
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 11:54:11 AM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!
That was wonderful Aika......you are always doing such nice things for your friends. I hope he appreciates your effort, I know I certainy do!
Would make a great song. How do you do it!
Just sit down and write? What a wonderful gift!
love you,
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Re: Eaten alivesněden zaživa
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 01:01:00 PM AEST
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| Some I didnt understand but it was still well done indeed! You have a caring heart! Christina |
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Re: Eaten alivesněden zaživa
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:19:57 AM AEST
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I would love to be a thought inside your mind.Some of the images I would meet there would be truly breathtaking I'm sure
steve
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