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pandora
Contributed by
Steeleyes
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:29:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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on the train
rain lashing down grey
heading to Vienna
late in the day
dubious reasons
take me there
to find love
to another unfair
into westbahnhof
no one to meet
an alien landscape
sad in defeat
now ride in a taxi
to hotel fuchs
down mariahilfe
how sad it looks
ringing J.
deep in the night
with greetings from A.
what I do..
is it right?
Copyright ©
Steeleyes
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2004-02-12 09:29:14]
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Re: pandora
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 11:24:46 AM AEST
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Left me sighing. Deep, sad, so full of questions, but peppered with despair. Nice stuff.
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Re: pandora
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 01:00:02 PM AEST
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| This reminds me so much of a trip I had to East Germany / Austria - grey, alien . . . sad. Spot on! |
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