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Pulling Teeth
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 04:23:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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All your hypocracies lies and bull*****,
Undermine everything good in the world,
And when you say that you own all this,
The truth waits by the door, waiting to be told,
Your all supremacist nationalist theives,
Sucking the life out of this world,
Egotism present, which will never leave,
And faceless values that you all hold
You believe in a world filled with riches,
And a flawless society which you live in,
Filled with power plants the size of pitches,
And liars coating themselves in layers of sin
You push your religion on the whole population
Door to Door, you lie and exhaust,
The first communium seems like an interegation
Converting the masses, force by force
Take a step back and look at material life,
Take a step back and see what you see,
Everything's wrong, nothing will suffice,
Your part of a western self-centered society
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-02-12 04:23:21]
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Re: Pulling Teeth
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by EternitysLyre on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 04:43:44 AM AEST
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It's too short! I didn't feel the calming and relaxing of tensions from within the poem...it would've been better if you'd just continued it to give it a stronger sense of closure. As much as I agree with you, you leave the reader begging for more.
Bad poet!
*laughs* No offense. That was a thoroughly pleasing rant.
"Ephemeral dreams and perpetual ire; melodious lies from eternity's lyre."
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Re: Pulling Teeth
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by slayer_015 on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 05:11:17 AM AEST
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AAAAAANNNNNGGGGGGGEEEEEEEERRRRRR!
Great writing.
Brian |
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Re: Pulling Teeth
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by dolly_dagger on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 10:10:21 AM AEST
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| yeah, i could've handled it being longer. don't censor your work for the impatient!! |
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