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The Blue Smudge

Contributed by CARAAAAA on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 04:10:33 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

And there he lay plastered down by inertia
reclining .. arms and legs
dangling
precariously from the nifty makeshift bobsled.
All the dredges of rigidity funneled from his limp body
drained and siphooned away with the alacrity
of thin whistling wind
Biting cold to a feverish pitch
Snow cascading down the rollicking hills
sauteed with solemnity
His coarse disgruntled garbs
glazed over and impoverished with dimunitive flecks
of fragmented snowflakes
Disintergrating, ruptured and dismantled just like
the features of his once taut ,gaunt face now
no longer strained but
slackened in despondent paralysis.
Is a thrifty swipe of rogue sufficient to combat the
furore of virulent winter ?
Where is the buxom babe of his righteous dreams with seems of her corset bursting portentiously?
Has our audacious lost his visionary appetite ?
Missionary plaque fisssured.
Is it droning on ,
ignoble and repititive
just like the rickety raft supporting his festering back is sliding down,
swiftly now under the snow governed bridge as the shrapnel like cold assails every poreof numbness
and the collective ache
tepidly assauges his torpid vapidly beating pulse.
Just as the writhingly intense speed of the
billowing wind like an invisible crescendo or avalanche
Just as his glassy eyes roll to the wide heavens
So white the vacous sky white,white..

Copyright © CARAAAAA ... [ 2004-02-12 04:10:33]
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Re: The Blue Smudge (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 05:16:05 AM AEST
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Simply and honestly amazing.I enjoyed it immensely.Astonishing.

Brian

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