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Epitaph
Contributed by
PoeticRequiem
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Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 09:34:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Doctrines of the grave
echoes of rapt funeral amazement
spoken in the tongues of silenced requiem
Crucifed faces staring into oblivion
ramiffications of withered dreams gone by
Answers seeking questions
riddles whispered in the dark
This carousel of souls will lie still no more
by; Jeremiah D. Normich
( The Wordsmith )
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PoeticRequiem
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2004-02-11 21:34:34]
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Re: Epitaph
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by faithmairee on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:32:22 PM AEST
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Great poem...I'll look forward to seeing some more of your work...i hope you will post more soon.
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Re: Epitaph
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:33:55 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, that was just beautiful, the imagery is amazing....I especially loved the phrase "carousel of souls". Beautifully written. |
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Re: Epitaph
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by Jazz on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 11:35:33 PM AEST
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You have brought a very deep subject into great words. I like the imagery you used, very much.. Thanks for a good write!
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Re: Epitaph
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by EternitysLyre on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 04:54:38 AM AEST
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I've been called the same thing. And it looks like we have the same need for elaborate diction. I enjoyed the mysterious unraveling of narration--much like my own work. I can't wait to see what else you write, as I'm doing so now.
"Ephemeral dreams and perpetual ire; melodious lies from eternity's lyre."
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