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Can't Get You Out of My Mind
Contributed by
James_Forest
on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 09:19:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You've become an obsession
Of mine just today
I love to be around you
But I don't know what to say
Can't get you out of my mind
You bring a smile to my face
When I've had a bad day
And when I look into your eyes
All my fears go away
Can't get you out of my mind
If love was a disease
I'm sure I'd be dead by now
Iwant to tell you about this
But I'm not quite sure just how
Can't get you out of my mind
I know you don't have a boyfriend
For now I hope that stays true
Until I get the courage
To say "I love you"
Copyright ©
James_Forest
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2004-02-11 21:19:20]
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Re: Can't Get You Out of My Mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by Angelchild on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 09:26:11 PM AEST
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| It always sucks to love someone from afar. I hope that you said something. It was a good poem! |
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Re: Can't Get You Out of My Mind
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:44:30 PM AEST
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| This is very well-expressed, I'm sure all the lovestruck ones the world over can relate to this. Congrats on writting such a good poem! |
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Re: Can't Get You Out of My Mind
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by Jazz on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 11:37:50 PM AEST
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If you never take a risk in your life, then you never really live. I say go for it.. :)
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Re: Can't Get You Out of My Mind
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by Asatru on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 05:04:22 PM AEST
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| woah buddy, love is a STRONG word. I do like a lot of your writings but in a lot of them you talk about wanted to tell someone whom you've barely talked to and barely know that you love them? Strong word man, you can't just spring that on someone... |
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