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~*Breanna*~
Contributed by
ABoyWhoCares
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Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 08:17:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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As Beautiful As Can Be,
As Far As The Eye Can See,
Words Can Not Express,
How Your Beauty Exist.
No One Is As Beautiful As You,
Your Beauty Is Just Too True.
Even After You Die,
Your beauty Will Exist.
Because, A Great Mind
Never Leaves This Place.
Copyright ©
ABoyWhoCares
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2004-02-11 20:17:22]
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Re: ~*Breanna*~
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by Daydreamer on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 11:11:06 PM AEST
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| This is a wonderful poem. She is truely lucky to have such a sweet and careing friend as yourself. ~Day~ |
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Re: ~*Breanna*~
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by Jazz on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 11:41:22 PM AEST
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Hmm, first, I get the sense that there is more then friendship... :)
Second, a good tribute. I hope it put good thoughts into her mind, at this time for her...
Jazz |
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Re: ~*Breanna*~
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by uchendu on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 12:59:09 PM AEST
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| This is a sweet poetic piece... you have a way with words.. I love it. Please hit my song-lyrics and make comments as well as vote the poems.. |
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Re: ~*Breanna*~
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 10:16:47 AM AEST
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This is not bad for a dedication poem. There is a song called "Maria", it is an old song that you can borrow some lessons from:
"Say it loud and I hear music playing
Say it soft and it's almost like praying
Maria, I'll never stop saying
-Maria"
Quote from the song "Maria" by Johnny Mathis" |
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